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User talk:Drunken Grepher

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"I'll rip thou guts from thy torso."

This..was not nice Night-One-Winged Sonic Shadow Silver The LSS Molly Angel 13:27, 21 October 2007 (PDT)

Meh, probably spawned from the fact that I recently wrote the description of when Taelon transforms a person into an Abomination. Has a lot of guts. Want me to put it here?

Drunken Grepher 13:36, 21 October 2007 (PDT)

Aright.

Meh. Before I put it, I want others reading to know that this is an extract from one of my fictions, so yeah, I do hold rights to it so steal it, and I'll literally rip thou guts from thy torso. Anyway, Here it is:

Draegar sprints up the staircase leading higher & higher up the tower. The staircase finally leads him to a large metal door. Draegar halts & takes a deep breath. Drawing his rapier from its scabbard, he dashes forwards & pushes open the metal door. In the very moment the door swings open, Draegar feels a hideously uneasy feeling within the inside of his body. He had reached Taelon’s throne room, but before he was even more than a metre inside he was down on his knees clutching his stomach in pain & feeling as if there were something trying to burst out. Taelon sat upon his black throne hardly moving as he glared upon the ill Draegar. Draegar begins to puke chunks of vomit from the mouth, but the vomit is soon replaced by blood. It isn’t long before Draegar finds something even thicker than blood rising up his throat. His eyes water & his neck bulges as a thick red stretchy yet solid organ bursts out his mouth. Draegar’s eyes widen & his arms outstretch as blood-soaked tentacles burst from out his eyelids & guts hang from out his mouth. Sharp points that were once his bones poke through the flesh of his arms & legs, & his torso has bulged to the point that it has ripped his upper clothing apart & hangs hideously against the ground. Draegar’s lower mouth widens to the point where his flesh is hardly even visible & his inner organs have become limbs & tentacles bursting from out his mouth. What now stood before Taelon was a hideous creature known as an Abomination, a creature under its creator’s control where the person it once was feels nothing but eternal pain until the Abomination itself is defeated.

The creature's death is pretty gory. Want me to put that too? Grepher