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| − | This..was not nice [[User:Night-One-Winged Sonic Shadow Silver The LSS Molly Angel|Night-One-Winged Sonic Shadow Silver The LSS Molly Angel]] 13:27, 21 October 2007 (PDT)
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| − | Meh, probably spawned from the fact that I recently wrote the description of when Taelon transforms a person into an Abomination. Has a lot of guts. Want me to put it here?
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| − | [[User:Drunken Grepher|Drunken Grepher]] 13:36, 21 October 2007 (PDT)
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| − | Meh. Before I put it, I want others reading to know that this is an extract from one of my fictions, so yeah, I do hold rights to it so steal it, and I'll literally rip thou guts from thy torso. Anyway, Here it is:
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| − | ''Draegar sprints up the staircase leading higher & higher up the tower. The staircase finally leads him to a large metal door. Draegar halts & takes a deep breath. Drawing his rapier from its scabbard, he dashes forwards & pushes open the metal door. In the very moment the door swings open, Draegar feels a hideously uneasy feeling within the inside of his body. He had reached Taelon’s throne room, but before he was even more than a metre inside he was down on his knees clutching his stomach in pain & feeling as if there were something trying to burst out. Taelon sat upon his black throne hardly moving as he glared upon the ill Draegar. Draegar begins to puke chunks of vomit from the mouth, but the vomit is soon replaced by blood. It isn’t long before Draegar finds something even thicker than blood rising up his throat. His eyes water & his neck bulges as a thick red stretchy yet solid organ bursts out his mouth. Draegar’s eyes widen & his arms outstretch as blood-soaked tentacles burst from out his eyelids & guts hang from out his mouth. Sharp points that were once his bones poke through the flesh of his arms & legs, & his torso has bulged to the point that it has ripped his upper clothing apart & hangs hideously against the ground. Draegar’s lower mouth widens to the point where his flesh is hardly even visible & his inner organs have become limbs & tentacles bursting from out his mouth. What now stood before Taelon was a hideous creature known as an Abomination, a creature under its creator’s control where the person it once was feels nothing but eternal pain until the Abomination itself is defeated.''
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| − | The creature's death is pretty gory. Want me to put that too?
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| − | '''Grepher'''
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| − | Before the stuff below, Dustin Blaze (he's an uber pyromancer, I'd rather tell you more about him verbally if you want to know) had set the creature on fire.
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| − | ''Blaze puts his sword into his left hand as his right hand begins to writhe in flames. Blaze forms a pattern in the air with his immolated right hand, forming flames in the shape of a spiral. Finishing the pattern, Blaze brings his hand back & then pushes it out against the spiral of flames. The flames suddenly shoot out towards the immolated Abomination, spinning round as it soars through the air. The spiral flames hit the Abomination & burn through its body like a flaming drill. The Abomination was now blackened & crisped up from the burning, & the spiral flames were now inside the centre of it’s bulging body. Seeing this, Blaze puts his arm down & stood still, & one second later, the flames within the creature’s body push outwards & the Abomination explodes violently from the inside. Gore is spewed everywhere from where the Abomination once was. All that was left of the hideous creature was a pool of blood & horribly mutated bones, & several small puddles of blood, gore & pieces of mutated organs laid all over the throne room.''
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| − | After killing the Abomination, Taelon proceeds to own Blaze's ass. I'm not gonna put too much here but I could tell you when we're back in school during the rare occasion I'm in for break or lunch. '''Grepher'''
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| − | Man,that gored.
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| − | Grepher,i need help,what page should i make next
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| − | i have these ideas
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| − | *Vegeta
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| − | *Trunks
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| − | *Sephiroth
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| − | *Goku
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| − | *Nightmare
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| − | And...
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| − | What do you think?
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| − | '''Grepher:''' Vegeta or Trunks. You know why.
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| − | Here it is,[[Vegeta]]
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| − | Nice thing you did on Vegeta Grepher [[User:Night-One-Winged Sonic Shadow Silver The LSS Molly Angel|Night-One-Winged Sonic Shadow Silver The LSS Molly Angel]] 06:44, 31 October 2007 (PDT)
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| − | Lol on this [[PENIS|page]]
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| − | '''Grepher:''' Long name, don't try to mess up my name on that invaluable list with your poor punctuation!
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