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Please go to [[Help:Template:Sources|this page]] for an idea of what we want our source pages to look like. --[[User:NinjaCoachZ|NinjaCoachZ]] 14:05, 11 June 2010 (CDT) | Please go to [[Help:Template:Sources|this page]] for an idea of what we want our source pages to look like. --[[User:NinjaCoachZ|NinjaCoachZ]] 14:05, 11 June 2010 (CDT) | ||
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| + | No offense, but your article for yourself needs work. I'm going to run down with what needs to be improved: | ||
| + | *''I first started out when I first got banned from MFGG (Mario Fan Games Galaxy) and people were being such jerks.'' OK, what event after this caused you to discover YouTube Poop? Please elaborate. | ||
| + | *''Messing Up Clips'' That's pretty much what YouTube Poop is. Try looking at [[Poopisms|this page]] and see if anything there matches your style. | ||
| + | *''Preferred Methods: Editing'' Again, that's pretty obvious. Explain exactly how you edit. | ||
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| + | And this one isn't about how to improve your article; it's just a strange contradiction I found. | ||
| + | *''Likes: Scratch. Dislikes: Sega, Sonic the Hedgehog.'' Scratch is a SEGA character from the Sonic the Hedgehog series. | ||
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| + | Anyway, take these to heart and use them to improve your page. I'm not bashing you; I'm just saying that you need to touch it up. --[[User:NinjaCoachZ|NinjaCoachZ]] 13:50, 25 June 2010 (CDT) | ||
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Please go to this page for an idea of what we want our source pages to look like. --NinjaCoachZ 14:05, 11 June 2010 (CDT)
No offense, but your article for yourself needs work. I'm going to run down with what needs to be improved:
- I first started out when I first got banned from MFGG (Mario Fan Games Galaxy) and people were being such jerks. OK, what event after this caused you to discover YouTube Poop? Please elaborate.
- Messing Up Clips That's pretty much what YouTube Poop is. Try looking at this page and see if anything there matches your style.
- Preferred Methods: Editing Again, that's pretty obvious. Explain exactly how you edit.
And this one isn't about how to improve your article; it's just a strange contradiction I found.
- Likes: Scratch. Dislikes: Sega, Sonic the Hedgehog. Scratch is a SEGA character from the Sonic the Hedgehog series.
Anyway, take these to heart and use them to improve your page. I'm not bashing you; I'm just saying that you need to touch it up. --NinjaCoachZ 13:50, 25 June 2010 (CDT)
