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There has been a dispute about the description on this page. I believe that my writing should stay, as it covers the same ground as the other one fluently and with proper English. It describes the locales the series takes place, "in and out" of high school, which is what you two are trying to say. If you want to write your own description, condense it or use proper English. Until you learn to do the latter HMTcomp, my writing shall stay. [[User:NinjaCoachZ|NinjaCoachZ]] 18:18, 31 December 2009 (CST) | There has been a dispute about the description on this page. I believe that my writing should stay, as it covers the same ground as the other one fluently and with proper English. It describes the locales the series takes place, "in and out" of high school, which is what you two are trying to say. If you want to write your own description, condense it or use proper English. Until you learn to do the latter HMTcomp, my writing shall stay. [[User:NinjaCoachZ|NinjaCoachZ]] 18:18, 31 December 2009 (CST) | ||
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| + | ''My English is fine you just in the bad mood'' | ||
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| + | ''Not only at it takes place at school it also takes place in Chiyo's Mansion and her summer house. '' | ||
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| + | Correction time! | ||
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| + | *"At" should be "does" | ||
| + | *"Takes" should be "take" | ||
| + | *No breaks in the entire sentence | ||
| + | *The "m" in "mansion" should not be capitalized. | ||
| + | *"The" in "the bad mood" should be "a" | ||
| + | *Again, no breaks in that sentence | ||
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| + | HMTcomp, your English doesn't even pass Grade 1 levels. If you're really from England, it doesn't show. [[User:NinjaCoachZ|NinjaCoachZ]] 18:27, 31 December 2009 (CST) | ||
Revision as of 16:27, 31 December 2009
There has been a dispute about the description on this page. I believe that my writing should stay, as it covers the same ground as the other one fluently and with proper English. It describes the locales the series takes place, "in and out" of high school, which is what you two are trying to say. If you want to write your own description, condense it or use proper English. Until you learn to do the latter HMTcomp, my writing shall stay. NinjaCoachZ 18:18, 31 December 2009 (CST)
My English is fine you just in the bad mood
Not only at it takes place at school it also takes place in Chiyo's Mansion and her summer house.
Correction time!
- "At" should be "does"
- "Takes" should be "take"
- No breaks in the entire sentence
- The "m" in "mansion" should not be capitalized.
- "The" in "the bad mood" should be "a"
- Again, no breaks in that sentence
HMTcomp, your English doesn't even pass Grade 1 levels. If you're really from England, it doesn't show. NinjaCoachZ 18:27, 31 December 2009 (CST)
